Tuesday, July 12, 2011

dabba number # TAIRHAN(13)



Yesterday a friend of mine told me a very strange and hilarious incident.After hearing that i concluded that one can expect anything from Pakistan railway express.

He told me he is coming to Faisalabad to Karachi by train.His train arrival is at evening.I thought okay that is nice and asked whether work or pleasure .He replied work and important.I said nice.My next question was alone?He said no i am bringing my parents .I replied him that is nicer.

Usually it is a habit of my this friend that he messages before boarding airplane on checking in a bus or train.It was evening and he didn't message.I suddenly reme
mbered by 10am he must be on train on his way ,travelling towards Faisalabad.Immediately i find his sms on my cellphone saying that he is not coming.I got worried and asked him ,"why? something serious happened?".You will not believe what he replied.Here it goes,

"My ticket said dabba number tairhan (buggie number 13).But the train just consisted of baraaan dabbay ( 12 buggies)"


Monday, July 11, 2011

(2)



B:hi
S:oh its you..
B:how you bin?
S:quiet fine.so ur back ?
B:in lhr
S:okie thats nice...
B:so how is ur bf?
S:he is fi9
B:u r still committed ?
S:no but we r friends....
B:y what happened?
S:i dont want to discuss!...
B:Ok.....hmmm
B:can i ask you something?
S:hmm not about him...yeah..

She knew it was coming ,he is going to ask me out .She knew that .No she was confirmed that is why he used to call her once in a while, when he was back in Pakistan or before going back.Or messaged late at an odd time and definitely clicked her when she was online rarely.A girl can tell.Especially one who was committed with a guy before. But she was feeling guilty.Something telling her you are lying to yourself.You do not like him at all ,do not give that answer if he asks you.....

B:Will you go out with me?
S:lol
S:isnt it too soon you are asking?
B:i waited too long for this .
B:ser when you both were together i prayed of u both breaking up.
S:i dont like that
B:but i like u alot
S:you hardly know me ,we never talked and u did not met me
B:i saw u on fb ....always
S:so,
B:answer?
S:i will think about that and let you know..
S:tc AH
B:no waite i want it now :)
S:AH

she goes to the chat window and clicks the option OFFLINE....

(taken from the novel i am attempting to write)

Saturday, July 9, 2011

(1)

Cheat, Liar, Cheat, Liar, Bitch, Whore;

Those were the only words that kept repeating in her head. She couldn’t sleep and she won’t ever unless he forgives her.

Life was going smooth and fine. It was almost perfect. What could she else ask for? Well she only wished now that her and his parents agree on them being officially engaged. She was happy as this year they decided to tell their parents.Baba and her sister just came .As usual Baba came home with his pack of doughnuts hated them but somehow when they melted so ravishingly in her mouth she actually liked them a little. She was happy Baba came back as usual her and here Baba’s taunting started but she missed that.Sadaqat bhai was on a holiday she happily helped her mom in the kitchen. Laughter was all around on messaging and even around her. But she never knew that how you cheat in the pass especially with some one very dear will not live you alone. She deserved that even because she was selfish and a liar. She lied to everybody. E.V.E.R.Y.B.O.D.Y.

She was doing work with her sister constant complaining of why she was doing work and watching “how I met your mother”. Still she was laughing. But when that phone call came she started stammering and shivering. It was him on the phone crying “I was so loyal to you. How can you do this to me? I read all your messages what you told me was full of lies! I can’t even imagine (sniff) (sniff)…what you did to me?”

continue....

(taken from the novel i am attempting to write)